Paul Vojta TWG-TDS@SHSU.edu
Fri, 17 Nov 1995 19:41:06 -0800 (PST)

I have just a couple nits regarding the latest draft.  I hope it's not
too late to fix them.

... or by postal mail to Karl Berry / 135 Center
Hill Road / Plymouth, MA 02360 / USA. We welcome all comments.

... or by postal mail to Karl Berry, 135 Center

Also, it's common to put more space preceding the zip code; in letters
I usually say

Plymouth, MA\quad 02360   or   Plymouth,MA \ 02360

2.  In Section B.3.2 (Web2c 7.0), it says:

... A site may of course override
these defaults; for example, to put everything under a single directory
such as \path|/usr/local/texmf|.

This sounds ungrammatical to me.  I suggest instead:

... A site may of course override
these defaults; for example, it may put everything under a single
directory such as \path|/usr/local/texmf|.

--Paul Vojta, vojta@math.berkeley.edu